It was about 2:30 am, nobody home.. what is going on? This house is completely empty,
See, where Tommi was located there wasn't another neighbor within a 5 mile radius, just surrounded by the woods and darkness,
The sense was activated within the house.
Tommi's blood began rushing, something just didnt feel right.
"It's ok" "I've been through much, much worse" he thought to himself.
Now the house was very traditional, beautiful, settling and tranquil, but if you let the Sense activate, it bcomes a very unsettling house, that seemed to be filled with demons.
*Sigh* "Why is nobody home this late?..."
All of sudden there was a laugh,
"What the hell was that??" Quickly thought, he went to go check if
He was not just hearing things.
He couldnt just leave, there was no cars, no light anyway, not even a neighbor.
He went down the hallway, to the stairs, nothing in sight, past the kitchen and then into the living room which was a set of stairs down past the washing room, all of a sudden the laugh become more clear, deeper, more clear much more cynical.
*Wake up, Tommi Wake up!!!* Lauren starts screaming
"Huh, what, what the heck"
"We have a fun party to attend for Halloween tonight!!" Screamed Lauren"
"Party? Who's party?"
"It's a community party going on, I told you I wanted to do more activities this year, I heard about it on facebook" answered Lauren
"Should we really trust that"
"Ughh, you are always skeptical stop being so paranoid"
"Well, didnt I tell you the story of what happened the last time I trusted something from the internet, it was about 8 years ago, I was 15 years old"
"No...what happened?"
It was Tommi and his bestfriend Jonathan. Jonathan went to buy a bike from this guy. Tommi always trusted his bestfriend with decision-making so he never questioned it
"Are you down with helping me out, Tommi? Asked Jonathan
"Whats going on, how can I help" Tommi felt the Sense from within but he never knew.
"Well, I want a bike like you, I'm tired of just walking around, or riding on the same bike as you, I want my own bike, and I finally saved my allowances to get one, and I found one for a great price on this website, we just have to meet the guy. The only thing is it's an hour away"
"An hour?!?!"
Tommi was a great friend, the place actually ended up being 2 hours away but, it was too late to turn around.
"Ooh oh, we are almost here it says!!!" Yells Jonathon
"This bike, better have an engine or something cause im tired of pushing my bike, it has been 2 hours, yo" angrily responds Tommi
They arrive, but what a strange fascinating place it was, there wasnt even a building just a little shed in the back area, it was all an open field, a beatdown place with patches of dirt within the grass the looks dead. There were about three children playing Smash brothers outside on chairs outside, and the electric outlets hooked up to a generator. There were farm animals roaming around but no barn in sight, what is this place . Tommi felt the sense getting stronger.
"This place gives me the creeps, it reminds me of a trailer park without the trailers" says Tommi
"Don't worry, look Tommi, There's kids playing Smash brothers!! We will be ok." "Loosen up man, you dont want to come here 2 hours for nothing"
"Yeah, I know. There is just something inside me that doesn't trust this, I mean there are just loose pigs roaming around here, it gives me the Willies"
"The Willies? Don't you mean the Williams?"
"Very funny"
A strange man approaches them, he was tall, and just creepy looking, he looked like a deadbeat version of Steve Jobs with the body of Jack Skellington.
"Wellll helllooo there" Said the very strange man, in a creepy tone
"You must be Jonathon, here for the bike"
"No my name is Tommi, this is Jonathon"
"Oooh my mistake Tommi, Jonathon you didnt tell me you were bringing somebody with you...nonetheless come with me Jonathon..Only Jonathon."
"What, why can't I tag along? You are only getting a bike"
"It was part of the deal, otherwise no bike"
"C'mon on Tommi, it wont take too long, this is a Mood2 bike, these are the best bikes, I'm getting for cheap" pleaded Jonathon,
"Ok,ok only cause I dont want to keep riding you around on my bicycle"
Tommi walks over to check the area out, While Jonathon tags along with the older man.
*20 minutes pass by*
"Hey mind if I sit here?" Asks Tommi
* Blank Stare by the child*
"So why are you here, is your friend buying something, and making you wait too? Or is this like the neighborhood arcade hahah" laughs Tommi
*Blank Stare*
"Lighten up! I was kidding, I live in Daicon Valley 2 hours away, we kid around like that"
"Guess he just doesnt want to talk, but he could of told me that"
"God this place freaks me out" Tommi thought to himself.
All of a sudden
"Ow!!" Yelled Tommi
A pig actually bit him.
"He likes you" said some strange older man with a southern accent. The man had longer hair, he was missing teeth and had a piece of wheat hanging out of his mouth.
"He just bit me, I'd hate to see how he acts when he doesn't like somone" sarcastically remarks Tommi
"He really likes you" said the Strange man
"Ok thats good to know."
The sense began to grow rapidly within him. He knew something was wrong.
"I really like you" The man says as he begins massaging Tommi's head.
"Get off me!!!!!!" Tommi yells as he gets ups and runs, to the shed where Jonathon is.
The strange man starts following him and starts laughing cynically while following him.
Tommi gets to the shed and starts banging hard on the door.
"Jonathon, Jonathon!!!!! Please open the door!!! Nothing.
The man is getting closer.
So Tommi backs up and literally uses all of his force, lowers his shoulders right into the door. It was such an old shed the door bust open.
".... oh my god" Tommi's eyes open with fear, as that Strange older gentleman that was with Jonathon was holding what looked like a giant screwdriver device as it was going through Jonathons eyes
Tommi screams and panics, and starts crying.
The older gentleman starts smiling at the sight of Tommi,
*All of a sudden* The shed door is shut right behind him, by the man who was chasing Tommi.
It was completely dark, and all Tommi can hear was a giant automatic screw driver thing, Now to make it clear it wasn't one you buy at home depot with the safety features, it was more of a giant piece of metal that was a flathead spinning at an incredible rate attached to some piece controlling that, which was loud. Tommi felt the sense, he listened closely the foolish olderman didnt realize the closer he approached Tommi, the louder The noise got. So Tommi quickly found a pitchfork on the ground and just charged right at the man as fast and as relentlessly as possible, and BAM got him, but right before the man died, he spoke into some bluetooth device and he said "he got me, he got me,...get the boy."
Tommi follows the sense and he sees a hole on the shed and also charged into that, right at that moment as he escaped, a man with a chainsaw was waiting in front of the shed about to open it, along with the other man who really liked Tommi. So Tommi is running with so much adrenaline, he is like Usain Bolt, while he does this, he goes to the kid playing the game and grabs him, but the arm falls off as he grabs it! It was some kind of wax figure, and the game that was on Smash Bros was just the computer AI playing each other....none of the kids were alive at all. It was an evil setup, Tommi didnt have time to stop and think. He ran to his Bike and rode as fast as he could away, at the time he was so scared it was 9:37 pm, and it just getting dark.
The adventure just began on this awful day.
"Why Jonathon, why did I have to take you to get the bike, I knew I should of not taken you to get that bike" Tommi thought to himself as he was crying his eyes out, This isnt fair!!! Tommi yells out , Tommi didn't know what to do at all, he didnt own a phone, was so scared he didn't grab Jonathons,
It's a 2 hour drive and Tommi had no idea how to get home, it was getting darker and more dark by the minute,
"Tommi, Tommi!! Is everything ok?" Lauren Snapped Tommi out of his trance.
"Yea I was just thinking about Jonathon and that awful day...."
"Baby, there was nothing you could do, what's done is done, you cant beat yourself over it, it wasnt your fault, lets just have a fun time at this party ok, now put on your costume." Lauren said as she was powdering herself up with makeup being dressed up as the Morticia Addams, and Tommi was about to suit up and get ready to be Gomez Addams.
The sense wasnt going away, it hasn't been this strong since the day with Jonathon, but he just shrugged it off,
.."maybe it's just paranoia." Tommi says to himself while looking in the mirror
"God, just let it be paranoia"
The time has come.10:30
"Awwww, Tommmiiiii you are looking so great, I love our couples costume, I just wish we could find an Uncle Fester"
"Haha, well if you don't shave again, I'd be able to find an Uncle ITT"
*Lauren smacks Tommi"
"Hahah im sorry babe, had to say it" Laughs Tommi
"Whatever, at least that lightened you up, now lets have some fun and get drunk"
Tommi and Lauren get into the car and are now headed to the party.
"This is my favorite time of the year, the leaves are beautiful, everyone plays dress up" states lauren
"I love this time, cause i can watch horror movies and not be questioned as a psycho" replies Tommi.
"What do you mean" asks Lauren
"Well, you can't watch Texas Chainsaw Massacre three days before Christmas, you just can't, I always binge watching those movies"
"Ohh so that's why you are afraid of everything?" Jokingly ask Lauren.
"Shutup, you known that's not true" replies Tommi while he's laughing
"I just have bad senses about this" Tommi said
"It will be okay, I promise."
They arrive at the party, Lauren was right! They go inside man, did it seem like a great party, there were blacklights, but the room had neon green lighting, it was so spooky, everyone there was alive.
Lauren and Tommi begin holding hands and started dancing to the monstermash, they saw a punch bowl, but they brought their own and drank that one instead. Tommi insisted just one rule, just in case, so Lauren respected his wishes.
"Babe, I'll be back I have to use the restroom, I drank too much of that punch"
Lauren said.
"No problem"
Tommi decided to roam around, check the place out.
He noticed a sign that said "No Sense Allowed"
No sense allowed?
"Hello, what is your name?"
"My name is Tommi
"Hey Tommi, welcome to my party! I am the host, my name is Dac, are you enjoying the party so far"
"Oh yea, it's fun, but what's up with the sign"
"That sign?" ..."ohh thats a refrence to the movie the sixth sense, like don't use it over here, it's supposed to be ghoulish, but hey why don't you go downstairs? Theres about to be a party announcement for everyone" eagerly stated Dac.
Something just does not feel right..,.Tommi thought to himself, so Tommi met up back with Lauren and at that very instance, he noticed the Dj and other people help run the show were giving him an evil eye, as if he were being watched. They knew he felt the sense, Tommi started to look at them as monsters, all of a sudden there was announcement "Well folks, I hope you are enjoying your time, because your time has now come, and there is nothing you can do mwuahaha" and that very instant, the walls shifted, the walls actually themselves rotated there were 5 people taking away with the dj booth and on the other side of the wall was an iron maiden, along what seemed to be other torture devices.
"Oh my god, what do we do, you were right Tommi, you were right, we need to get out of here." Lauren began panicking
Also everydoor was closed off by metal barricades.
"What do we do?!?!" Lauren had to scream over shrieks of horror.
"We have to remain calm, just give me a moment to figure out what is going on"
Time seemed to slow down, and what seemed to be an energy aura of a figure picked up.
"Tommi, Tommi, Can you hear me" the figure said
"Where the hell is that coming from" thought Tommi
"Yes." Answered Tommi
"Yes?!?! We need to get out of here now!!!!"
"Tommi, to talk to me you have to use your thought, you can't speak otherwise everyone will hear you, I can't communicate like that"
"What is this, I need help, me and my wife are so scared.."
"It's Jonathon, Tommi"
"Jonathon?!? Tommi started crying "how?"
"I don't have time to explain, but After I was killed a spirit taught me about this energy called The Sense, it gives you the ability to see things for how they really are.
"I have the ability to stop time, but I can't hold it forever, or i'll use all the energy that is used to keep me in existence"
"You don't realize, but you used the sense to summon me! You had me in mind when this was going on, you are more powerful than you believe. Now go a couple rooms away from here and you will find a switch, hit that, then use the force that you used when you ran into the shed. It is up to you, I missed you Tommi, and I've been watching over you but I have to go"
"Tommi, wake up Tommi!!!!!" Yelled Lauren
" what, holy sh*t"
"The man is coming!!"
Tommi grabbed Lauren and used The sense to guide him, it was like some sort of instinct, where is that switch he was talking about?!?
"Switch..who was talking about?!?"
"Jonathon"
"Jonathon is dead!!!"
"I dont have time to argue just help me find a switch!!!!" Yelled Tommi
"Looking for this?"
It was Dac, and had the switch in his hand.
"There is no escaping, look, I know who you are, remember the pitchfork incident, well you didnt hit me stab me hard enough"
"Oh my god"
"That is right, and I know youre stupid wife would be dumb enough to come, and make you tag along, I made sure she got the email"
"You son of a bitch, youve been stalking my wife and plotting your revenge"
"That's right and n-
Right as he was talking, Tommi charged at him full speed, the same way as he did when he was 15 but he had no pitchfork, instead they started brawling it out!
Tommi gave a few licks in the face to Dac, Dac threw Tommi off of him, and got his infamous giant screwdriver device, it seemed more sophisticated it was going fast, and the machine had two screwdrivers like ot were a cynical automatic electric cream whipper, it was genuinely terrifying, meanwhile Lauren saw the switch and and ran to pick it up..
Oh no!!! He stabbed her in the hip, Lauren is down.
Right at that moment, Tommi got so mad and he released the sense so hard it was like a sonic boom and threw Dac across the room right into a fire poker that was in the luckiest place from The sense.
Tommi was working with no time to spare, he lifted up lauren and used the switch that deactivated the metal blockades from the wall.
It was a mad, mad scene, he found a door and had to go to the next neighbors yard, he couldnt make it to the hospital on foot, carrying lauren.
Tommi banged on the door
This older lady answered ready to hand out candy
"Please, please call an ambulance, I'll explain what hap..." at that very instant Tommi blacked out
"Tommi, Tommi, wake up"
"What, what..was this all a dream?"
*Tommi looked around and noticed he was in a hospital bed*
"No I love you babe, you solved a case thats been ongoing withna serial killer, you saved my life and 100 others, remember the DJs who gave you an evil eye, they were sedated by a drug called Scopolamine, it makes you lose your freewill and you have to do what they are told, they were kidnapped, you are a hero."
"Nice, no more costume parties for me."
"Oh shutup, no time to rub it in, you are going to be im the news and everything!!!"
Tommi then saw Jonathon crying in joy in a split second because he avenged the man who killed his innocent bestfriend. "I'm free" he heard Jonathons voice in his head.
Tommi then recieved a medal for his actions, and became a well-known hero, and began educating young people about The Sense, and to always trust it, cause it is better to be safe than sorry. The end.